Just Desserts reading

Just desserts

for this week at reading we read about just deserts. just desserts is about somebody who got into a fight for not letting some people sit where we was sitting

here is what I did

24 Hour foot print

 

Today at Cyber-smart we made a 24 hour footprint with thing link. We used our history to see what we went on. i also learnt that after we post it on to our blog we can still edit. anything that is on you history people can see

my sun set pastel work

this is my sunset pastel work. I started with my sun and went down to the sea. sun is hot, the hills are warm and the sea is cold    

GREEN PEACE

this is my green peace work we did it for hotspots

i learnt about now its your turn

This is my game

i made this game when i was at home i thought you would like it

://studio.code.org/c/106488272

i made it on code.org. code.org is a  site that you can make games for you and your friends.

   

my trasnformation

this is my transformation that i made for maths 

Autumn wirting

we have been learning to make our writing more interesting. to do this we have been Re-crafting our writing. we used a describe map to which helps us plan our ideas in more detail. our topic was autumn. Each time we used better adjectives and similes. these are highlighted so we you see the adjectives 

my favorite thing about writing this is a different way to write            

this is the writng

Adjectives

Similes

My favourite sentence

 

Autumn writing

Attempt 1: Autumn is a season. the ground in Autumn is colorful because all of the leaves are on the ground. the weather gets colder because winter is coming. people are raking up leaves because they are dieing. the days get shorter because the sun rises later. Tomatoes are getting riper because the change of weather the grass does not grow as fast as it normally does because autumn is colder

Attempt 2: Autumn is a colorful cold season. the ground in Autumn is colorful a rainbow because red yellow and brown leaves are on the ground. the weather gets colder because snowy winter is coming. people are raking up leaves because they are dieing. the days get shorter because the burning hot orange sun rises later. Tomatoes are getting riper because the change of weather.  the grass does not appear as fast to grow normally does because autumn is freezing.

Attempt 3: Autumn is a beautiful cold season. the ground in Autumn is colorful a rainbow because red yellow and brown leaves are on the ground. the weather gets colder because snowy winter is coming. people are raking up leaves because the leaves they are kicking the bucket  .the days get shorter because the burning hot orange sun rises later. Tomatoes are getting riper because the change of weather.  the grass does not grow like it is as it is a jiffy because autumn is bitter.

Attempt 4: Autumn is a beautiful cold season. the ground in Autumn is colorful a rainbow because red yellow and brown leaves are on the ground. the weather gets colder because snow like winter is coming. people are raking up leaves because the leaves are kicking the bucket. the days get shorter because the burning hot orange sun rises later. Tomatoes are getting riper because the change of weather.  the grass does not grow like a jiffy because autumn is bitter.

Attempt 5: Autumn is a beautiful below zero season. the ground in Autumn is multi colored rainbow because red yellow and brown leaves are on the ground. the weather gets colder because snow like winter is coming. people are raking up leaves because they are the days get shorter because the burning hot orange sun rises later. Tomatoes are getting riper because the change of weather.  the grass does not grow in a split second because autumn is bitter.